Have I ruined my chances of getting a reply?

[iloveharrypotter1800]

On Monday I sent a LOR a picture and a SASE to Bonnie Wright.
I think the first second and third paragraph were great. Then I wrote P.S I have enclosed a self addressed stamped envelope so if you do reply you dont have to pay for postage.

I feel really stupid for writing it and feel it might ruin my chances because I think it sounds a bit pushy.

BQ - How do you improve your chances of getting a reply?

[Jordann]

I wouldn't say you'd have ruined your chances.

[Tabby]

I don't think you've ruined your chances for a reply. I say something similar at the end of my letters. I say something like. "I have enclosed a picture and return postage. I hope you won't mind signing the picture to me."

[Jaffer]

I really cannot see how it would. It is hard to invision a situation whereby a celeb does not respond due to what you wrote.

[jessemcluv]

Naww. My letters, wow. I don't even mention the return envelope till the end and I say "I have included a postage-paid for envelope for your reply."
but if I have a picture i say:
"i included a picture for you to sign. Could you please send it back for me? it would mean alot."
i think celebrities ignore you if you send to them to much (**COUGH COUGH ME**) to like eveyr tour stop (**COUGH COUGH ME**)

[jessemcluv]

Naww. My letters, wow. I don't even mention the return envelope till the end and I say "I have included a postage-paid for envelope for your reply."
but if I have a picture i say:
"i included a picture for you to sign. Could you please send it back for me? it would mean alot."
i think celebrities ignore you if you send to them to much (**COUGH COUGH ME**) to like eveyr tour stop (**COUGH COUGH ME**)